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Louis Lafair
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writer | board game inventor | product manager | dog dad | www.louislafair.com
This is my 2nd MG book. (My 1st book got 4 full requests, 0 offers, & I learned a lot.)

While I wait, I try to focus on writing a different project. Someone once told me that the best way to increase odds is to keep writing more books :)

I found this data inspiring: hannahholt.com/blog/2017/10...
May 7, 2025 at 1:08 PM
I also sought out extra feedback from other writing friends—beyond my crit group and beta readers—on my query and opening pages.
May 7, 2025 at 1:05 PM
Thanks so much!

I started with ~10/batch. In early batches, I tried to include enough agents with high response rates & quick response times (based on QueryTracker data).

After my first few full requests, I increased batch size. As of now, I’ve sent 61 total queries for this MG book.
May 7, 2025 at 1:05 PM
I just hit 10 full requests! Here’s what has worked for me so far:

DETAILS (more specific = more likely to stand out)

STAKES (why does it matter?)

REVISIONS (my first batch of queries got 0 requests, so I revised before my next batch)

#kidlitchat
May 7, 2025 at 2:00 AM
With the arts under attack, what happens next is up to us. We still have the power to keep creating, to speak up for libraries, and to support the next generation of artists and writers. (4/4)
March 21, 2025 at 8:23 PM
It meant everything to me to see people—even at the highest level—supporting the arts. As a result, a decade later, I’m still writing poetry and children’s books. Writing expands my world and helps me escape into a better one… (3/4)
March 21, 2025 at 8:22 PM
Over ten years later, I still remember our appointment ceremony at the White House. I remember the First Lady of the U.S. saying that she loved my poem. I remember getting back to school and a classmate asking, “All that, just for poetry?” Yes. All that. For poetry… (2/4)
March 21, 2025 at 8:22 PM
Thanks so much!!
January 17, 2025 at 6:44 PM
Thanks for doing this raffle - great idea!
January 15, 2025 at 8:01 PM
Love these charts 📊 Thanks for sharing!
January 14, 2025 at 2:54 AM
Thanks so much!
January 14, 2025 at 12:02 AM
thank you!! 😊
January 13, 2025 at 6:14 PM
Thank you!!
January 13, 2025 at 2:10 PM
My HOPE (fingers crossed) for 2025: get an agent by querying book 1

My GOAL (in my control) for 2025: finish rewriting book 2

#kidlitchat
January 8, 2025 at 2:18 AM
Some of my favorite reads this year:

THE SWIFTS by
@bethatintervals.bsky.social

A WIZARD'S GUIDE TO DEFENSIVE BAKING by
@tkingfisher.com

IMPOSSIBLE CREATURES by Katherine Rundell

#kidlitchat
December 18, 2024 at 2:48 AM
Mapmaker is available straight from our publisher: www.gotoysandgames.com/product/mapm...

And on Amazon: www.amazon.com/Lafair-Famil...
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December 16, 2024 at 8:39 PM
Thank you! :)
December 10, 2024 at 12:31 AM