London
London
@londonc.bsky.social
Writer slightly obsessed with Spain by night, mental health counselor by day.
Historical fantasy and historic-inspired high fantasy
November 14, 2025 at 11:30 PM
50000 At present. Targeting 90-95,000
November 14, 2025 at 8:45 PM
Mercedes’ life is shattered along with her leg, destroying her dreams & only way out of poverty. If she can find an ancient idol, she might be healed, but the fascists & anarchists want it to. The manipulative idol wants to bring back the Celtiberian gods though war
November 14, 2025 at 4:57 PM
SILVIA MORENO-GARCIA meets ALIX E. HARROW. Spain, 1924, new dictatorship. Ancient gods return: fascists & anarchists wants them. Mercedes needs the idols to heal & reclaim dancing—her salvation—but the gods have been manipulating everyone for blood.
November 14, 2025 at 4:56 PM
Same problem. I was wondering why my posts weren’t posting. The hashtag for critique partner might have been the problem
November 14, 2025 at 4:46 PM
I like this one the best. What’s the intended age?
November 7, 2025 at 9:50 PM
Huge improvement!
November 7, 2025 at 9:28 PM
Can you hint at the nature of the dreams? What’s unique about the book isn’t coming through for me in this version
November 7, 2025 at 9:00 PM
Small suggestion. Start a new sentence after “…with a girl,” and begin it with “The girl….” Right now, I thought it was Musashi kidnapping the BF until later in the post.
November 7, 2025 at 8:59 PM