yall what not believe what i am reading

that was so moving. have they thought about releasing a poetry book?

back to complain a little thought because they tagged this as major slow burn but we are only 1/3 through this fic. like okay sure we are 150K words deep but still side eyeing….

we did it joe 🫡 *plays baby can i hold you by tracy chapman*

phew it was shorter than a normal chapter

flashback chapter (i HATE a flashback chapter BC WHY ARE THEY ALWAYS AFTER THE DRAMATIC SHIT. ONE WAS DRUGGED AND ALMOST KIDNAPPED AND THE OTHER ONE WAS SHOT. NOW I GOTTA READ THIS SHIT????)

thank you for censoring this 🫶

in one of the early chapters they mentioned it was unbetaed. i am now on chapter 7 and the COMPLETE 180 in the writing is tangible. its actually insane. they definitely got someone to beta their fic bc there is almost no way this is the same author even but who i am i to complain? im enjoying it now

right exactly. like no hate to the author but ive been hearing such good things for years i had higher expectations

exactly how i feel about this one so far. like the plot isnt bad but the writing sounds like fics i read when i was 13. you wouldnt BELIEVE the number of made up words ive ready today

ohhh okay i dont think ive read that one (i have read some destiel but not a ton). it sounds familiar though. is the writing bad?

still no smut but they had a sexual tension scene and i was totally correct. it is 100% the smut thats this fics selling point

wait which one?

this fic is REALLY not capturing me like i thought it would bc i always hear great things about it. but i havent got to the smut yet so that must be REALLY GOOD

its not as good as i thought it would be so far… ive waited AT LEAST 3 years to start this fix bc it takes a lot for me to handle over 100k much less 400k

did anyone “survive” that. survive is a big word.

unless its a group chat then i would go with bold. it wouldnt bug me if it isnt formatted, it just makes it easier to keep track of who is speaking without having to actually read the names if that makes sense?