As she woke up in the pod, she remembered three things.
As she woke up in the pod, she remembered three things.
Over the last year I got more serious about my writing. I sent out 73 submissions, and got 3 stories accepted. (I withdrew 17 simultaneous submissions.)
Over the last year I got more serious about my writing. I sent out 73 submissions, and got 3 stories accepted. (I withdrew 17 simultaneous submissions.)
First line:
Carter "Doc" McCoy had left a morning call for six o'clock, and he was reaching for the telephone the moment the night clerk rang.
First line:
Carter "Doc" McCoy had left a morning call for six o'clock, and he was reaching for the telephone the moment the night clerk rang.
"When I was born, the name for what I was did not exist."
"When I was born, the name for what I was did not exist."
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First line: "They had come to the spot in the freshness of June, chased from the village by its people, following deer path through the forest, the valleys, the fern groves, and the quaking bogs."
I love that list.
First line: "They had come to the spot in the freshness of June, chased from the village by its people, following deer path through the forest, the valleys, the fern groves, and the quaking bogs."
I love that list.
First lines: "I have no hatred in me. I'm almost certain of that."
I like how the author introduces this uncertainty especially around such a strong emotion as hate.
First lines: "I have no hatred in me. I'm almost certain of that."
I like how the author introduces this uncertainty especially around such a strong emotion as hate.
First line: "The women in the river, singing."
Very enigmatic. Kind of timeless, like a memory can be.
First line: "The women in the river, singing."
Very enigmatic. Kind of timeless, like a memory can be.
The first line and first paragraph are fantastic. Munro plops us right into the character's world. You can feel what it is to be them, and there. "We squished them tenderly..." Wonderful.
The first line and first paragraph are fantastic. Munro plops us right into the character's world. You can feel what it is to be them, and there. "We squished them tenderly..." Wonderful.