Can anybody give me tips/feedback on this piece I'm working on? I'm using calligraphy pen, and it's proving to be a bit of a challenge.

Working on a comic for a project, and I need some criticism. Anyone have any advice? (I replaced my real name for my username for safety reasons, so don't take the name into account)

I gotta put myself out there somehow, so here's a quick intro or somethin
• I draw Sonic stuff (I also love anything Sonic related)
• Trying to learn how to make comics
• Learning graphic design things
• I don't support AI "art" (or AI in general)
• I love video games

Felted Chao plushie I made awhile back. I posted this on my Twitter, but I feel like I should post this here to hopefully brighten at least one person's day since everything's all messy rn