Gaby
jordanspilgrim.bsky.social
Gaby
@jordanspilgrim.bsky.social
Human person. I like taking photos…sometimes.
Sentence 1 suggests that your heart pounded and the sun burned your skin.

Sentence two says that t your heart pounded and unrelated (or maybe related, not sure what’s going on in your story), the sun was burning.

Hope this helps.
March 6, 2025 at 1:07 AM
@jamellebouie.net , presumably you know some of these folks, have they ever explained why they do this?
January 9, 2025 at 4:44 AM