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This ending is more what my heart yearned for. Jocelyn and Alyssa finally together, it warms the heart.
November 21, 2025 at 5:12 PM
This ending is more what my heart yearned for. Jocelyn and Alyssa finally together, it warms the heart.
Oh I didnt mean to make you think that I thought I was being ignored or anything. It was just me reflecting after reading through the story after reading the end. I dont expect any comments back I just cba commenting on ao3 cuz I dont like being a guest user and I never bothered making an account.
November 21, 2025 at 4:59 PM
Oh I didnt mean to make you think that I thought I was being ignored or anything. It was just me reflecting after reading through the story after reading the end. I dont expect any comments back I just cba commenting on ao3 cuz I dont like being a guest user and I never bothered making an account.
This came off more negative than I intended, I liked the ending even if it made me sad. The Jocelyn reveal was like the mother of all gutpunches that I didn't but should've seen coming, it made me want to cry. On rereading it totally fits but I still refuse to believe it.
November 17, 2025 at 2:54 PM
This came off more negative than I intended, I liked the ending even if it made me sad. The Jocelyn reveal was like the mother of all gutpunches that I didn't but should've seen coming, it made me want to cry. On rereading it totally fits but I still refuse to believe it.
You sure fooled me, I thought Jocelyn was going to be a more layered and nuanced character than being a hyper libidinous shitheel whose kink is homewrecking and skipping on paying alimony. If not for that and Embers excessive punishment this was like almost a happy ending.
November 14, 2025 at 6:52 PM
You sure fooled me, I thought Jocelyn was going to be a more layered and nuanced character than being a hyper libidinous shitheel whose kink is homewrecking and skipping on paying alimony. If not for that and Embers excessive punishment this was like almost a happy ending.
That story messed me up
October 30, 2025 at 4:43 PM
That story messed me up
I’ll read it again 🫡
October 15, 2025 at 11:08 AM
I’ll read it again 🫡
B-but I already did 😭
October 14, 2025 at 4:06 PM
B-but I already did 😭
Seriously good stuff. Can't wait for the cat to be fully out of the bag so Miguel can get a thorough walkthrough of Mias influencer business. 😏
October 13, 2025 at 10:30 AM
Seriously good stuff. Can't wait for the cat to be fully out of the bag so Miguel can get a thorough walkthrough of Mias influencer business. 😏
AAAAARGH YOU TEASE!!!!!!
Hopefully there will be another opportunity for Aly to bounce on it.
(Be it Jocelyn or Fil I don't mind either, just keep that hoe Val away from her)
For now... demons dukes and dragons.
Hopefully there will be another opportunity for Aly to bounce on it.
(Be it Jocelyn or Fil I don't mind either, just keep that hoe Val away from her)
For now... demons dukes and dragons.
October 11, 2025 at 10:52 AM
AAAAARGH YOU TEASE!!!!!!
Hopefully there will be another opportunity for Aly to bounce on it.
(Be it Jocelyn or Fil I don't mind either, just keep that hoe Val away from her)
For now... demons dukes and dragons.
Hopefully there will be another opportunity for Aly to bounce on it.
(Be it Jocelyn or Fil I don't mind either, just keep that hoe Val away from her)
For now... demons dukes and dragons.
Oh man OH MAN. Whoever is asking for horsedong has my support 100%. And even if I am completely off the mark, whatever you've planned will no doubt still be hot as fuck. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. o/
October 10, 2025 at 10:40 AM
Oh man OH MAN. Whoever is asking for horsedong has my support 100%. And even if I am completely off the mark, whatever you've planned will no doubt still be hot as fuck. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. o/
But I'm tired 😩
October 7, 2025 at 12:24 PM
But I'm tired 😩
Nice chapter. Aly standing up for herself is seriously good shit, very cathartic after all she has been through. Wonder what this thing you think we will like is. Alyssa catching? girly bits reveal? Filanore finally revealing her "equipment"? Maybe these are just things I want though.
October 7, 2025 at 8:35 AM
Nice chapter. Aly standing up for herself is seriously good shit, very cathartic after all she has been through. Wonder what this thing you think we will like is. Alyssa catching? girly bits reveal? Filanore finally revealing her "equipment"? Maybe these are just things I want though.
Its been a few chapters since I last checked up on this. caught up and damn Alyssa really went through it and has come out a new person. I wont lie though the ending of this chapter fucked me up.
September 19, 2025 at 10:02 PM
Its been a few chapters since I last checked up on this. caught up and damn Alyssa really went through it and has come out a new person. I wont lie though the ending of this chapter fucked me up.
Yo that's pretty gay, happy for ya. I should strive to be gayer too.
August 29, 2025 at 12:57 PM
Yo that's pretty gay, happy for ya. I should strive to be gayer too.
Sorry to hear it, hopefully there is someway for you to resolve this bs.
August 21, 2025 at 11:49 AM
Sorry to hear it, hopefully there is someway for you to resolve this bs.
Jesus that sounds beyond fucked. I had a really hard time finding the right medication for my ADD and if that happened to me I'd be so very screwed.
August 18, 2025 at 2:21 PM
Jesus that sounds beyond fucked. I had a really hard time finding the right medication for my ADD and if that happened to me I'd be so very screwed.
I suppose it's a bit of a blessing in disguise that you had to "put down the pen" which let you reflect on what you were writing. But getting injured sucks all the same, wishing you a speedy recovery without any complications!
August 16, 2025 at 6:54 AM
I suppose it's a bit of a blessing in disguise that you had to "put down the pen" which let you reflect on what you were writing. But getting injured sucks all the same, wishing you a speedy recovery without any complications!
Generational talent right there. 😂
July 28, 2025 at 6:01 PM
Generational talent right there. 😂
Aww man I get off work and AO3 is down.
LET ME IN! LET ME IIIIIIIIIIIN!!! Also Ember chapter again? Gonna have to get myself a nice huff of cope before I dive in then.
LET ME IN! LET ME IIIIIIIIIIIN!!! Also Ember chapter again? Gonna have to get myself a nice huff of cope before I dive in then.
July 28, 2025 at 3:55 PM
Aww man I get off work and AO3 is down.
LET ME IN! LET ME IIIIIIIIIIIN!!! Also Ember chapter again? Gonna have to get myself a nice huff of cope before I dive in then.
LET ME IN! LET ME IIIIIIIIIIIN!!! Also Ember chapter again? Gonna have to get myself a nice huff of cope before I dive in then.
I shot my shot, it is what it is. And yeah the game is great fun even though I am not usually very kind to gacha games.
July 21, 2025 at 10:23 PM
I shot my shot, it is what it is. And yeah the game is great fun even though I am not usually very kind to gacha games.
Didn't know you were into horse girls😏
*cough*umamusumeficwhen*cough*
*cough*umamusumeficwhen*cough*
July 20, 2025 at 5:19 PM
Didn't know you were into horse girls😏
*cough*umamusumeficwhen*cough*
*cough*umamusumeficwhen*cough*
Probably the best elven perspective chapter imo, felt less "Ember is a bad wife" and more "wow Ember has a problem". Which is nice cause I am holding my thumbs for an Alyssa and Ember ending which involves them both embracing the fact that they are both total gooners with a dash more love & respect.
July 20, 2025 at 5:01 PM
Probably the best elven perspective chapter imo, felt less "Ember is a bad wife" and more "wow Ember has a problem". Which is nice cause I am holding my thumbs for an Alyssa and Ember ending which involves them both embracing the fact that they are both total gooners with a dash more love & respect.
That is fantastic! Keep up the good work.
July 18, 2025 at 3:32 PM
That is fantastic! Keep up the good work.
This story is emotionally eviscerating me.
July 18, 2025 at 3:30 PM
This story is emotionally eviscerating me.