Such great #revpit #10queries advice for other MG Contemporary writers below from @leahrambadt.bsky.social! MG seems tough right now, so hopefully this is helpful. I've reposted my feedback here as well. [FP/QL8]. :) 😍 #iamquerying

QL8 MG C
Overall structure is good. QL is on the long side though. Premise sounds promising, but there’s a lot of telling and too many details in the summary paras; could pare that down, and bring out the MC’s voice more. Try to cover the broad strokes of MS. #RevPit #10Queries

FP8 MG C
Love the MC’s voice! Great work with balancing MC interiority with chara interactions to start establishing who MC is and the problems they’re facing. Setting is a little vague, could use a little more developing. Interested in reading more. #RevPit #10Queries

QL2 MG C
Love the voice in this one! Very engaging and entertaining, instantly caught my attention. Great work previewing writing style and MC voice. It’s on the long side, so tightening the language and focusing on GMC while still keeping the voice is key. #RevPit #10Queries

FP2 MG C
MC is hilarious, def want to follow them around for an entire story. Love the MC’s voice, the bits of interiority, and how descriptive lang reflects the MC’s POV. Opening seems high energy to reflect MC’s high energy; it’s an effective hook, but would use strategically. #RevPit #10Queries

I'm still waiting to see my editor's feedback on my submission, but thank you to all the editors for the great feedback. I'll be spying on my inbox every hour on the hour until then. 😅 #revpit #10queries

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