James
jamesborley.bsky.social
James
@jamesborley.bsky.social
Knee deep in the passenger seat of editing my first novel ⌨️
Reader 📖
Day job in marketing 🖥️
Here because I missed the whole Twitter thing and I'm too old for BookTok.
The efficacy test. We're proving that even the most painful memories can successfully be severed, right? To what end? Is it a coup where we find out Lumon have secretly been implanting chips in everyone and they're just waiting to flip the switch to sever everyone and just nobody realises?
March 21, 2025 at 12:29 PM
One of my biggest is around place and what activates the chip. We know the severed floor and birthing cabins do it, but what is happening exactly? Can it be recreated elsewhere?
March 21, 2025 at 12:23 PM
3. Cobel invented the whole thing and left her plans in a tatty notebook she kept hidden in a weird underground snow bunker for decades?
March 7, 2025 at 3:56 PM
2. Helena saying Hannah instead of Gemma at the restaurant. What's that about.
March 7, 2025 at 3:54 PM
1. Burt. What's going on with the timeline. Has he been at Lumon for 10 or 20yrs? Did Fields slip?
March 7, 2025 at 3:52 PM
I have never been able to do this. I think it's wonderful.
January 18, 2025 at 8:26 AM
I hadn't even considered the whole AI thing! I'm enjoying being back on Google docs, purely because I can write on my phone, laptop and tablet so easily. I'm sure I'll change my mind when I'm further into this editing process and I'm tearing my hair out though 😂
January 17, 2025 at 4:33 PM
The story is so bad. Dialogue awful. I love Keanu, but jeez, if it wasn't for his phenomenal hair he may as well be a well-oiled cardboard cutout. And he kills 77 people mainly because they stole his car and killed his dog?
January 11, 2025 at 8:32 PM