Some other ideas for the torso, I’m starting to feel like the large chest and hips segments are at odds with the rest of the design, so extending the midriff seems to help. I hope the rivet points sell the synthetic nature of the skin. I want it to seem like a thick rubber over mechanical entrails

Let’s give her a shirt too

This is the original

That said, thank you for speaking up, I think ultimately being challenged on the content of my work will drive me to improve, at least I hope

While I’m glad to hear your input I don’t think I entirely agree. You’re certainly right that in the original piece the arm seems misproportioned, but I think going any further to alter the composition would compromise the feeling of the piece and I’m willing to sacrifice anatomy for the vibes

It’s not a huge difference, but I did a quick edit to raise the shoulder a bit and relax the arm. What do you think?