‘Of course your mother can stay another week,’ I say, my heart plummeting.
‘Good, I already said yes.’ He hangs a baubel on the tree.
I manage a smile, reach for a paper chain. ‘You’ll be at work?’
He nods. ‘But you’ll have fun.’
I crush the loops without thinking.
‘Careful, silly.’
‘Of course your mother can stay another week,’ I say, my heart plummeting.
‘Good, I already said yes.’ He hangs a baubel on the tree.
I manage a smile, reach for a paper chain. ‘You’ll be at work?’
He nods. ‘But you’ll have fun.’
I crush the loops without thinking.
‘Careful, silly.’
Careful. There’s a step.
I can’t see.
Wait. Better?
Yes. Who lives here?
My Gran.
Oh god. Sorry. How did she..?
Dunno. Wasn't told.
It’s a cute room. One chair, one table. So dusty.
Yeah. She...
Look, an open book. Misery! And tea. Josh, this mug’s still warm.
What? Can't be. Mum's away.
Careful. There’s a step.
I can’t see.
Wait. Better?
Yes. Who lives here?
My Gran.
Oh god. Sorry. How did she..?
Dunno. Wasn't told.
It’s a cute room. One chair, one table. So dusty.
Yeah. She...
Look, an open book. Misery! And tea. Josh, this mug’s still warm.
What? Can't be. Mum's away.
He pierces my nights and shatters my days when, the moment I think of other things he whispers, ‘Remember me, I did exist.’
I can’t help it. I ease open the drawer where his never-worn bootees lie hidden in tissue.
I stroke the wool, soft to the touch and whisper back, ‘I’m sorry.’
He pierces my nights and shatters my days when, the moment I think of other things he whispers, ‘Remember me, I did exist.’
I can’t help it. I ease open the drawer where his never-worn bootees lie hidden in tissue.
I stroke the wool, soft to the touch and whisper back, ‘I’m sorry.’
He peers at the drawing: 'Tube Pedicle' of Jim, with pencil skin snaking from face to hand.
McIndoe saved his nose, his life.
Lentaigne, his image.
In the silent room the ghosts of other Guinea Pigs crowd but he only sees Jim.
'Sorry. We're closing now.'
He smiles. 'See you tomorrow.'
He peers at the drawing: 'Tube Pedicle' of Jim, with pencil skin snaking from face to hand.
McIndoe saved his nose, his life.
Lentaigne, his image.
In the silent room the ghosts of other Guinea Pigs crowd but he only sees Jim.
'Sorry. We're closing now.'
He smiles. 'See you tomorrow.'
I wait.
She fidgets, glancing around. ‘About a room,’ she whispers.
‘No room here.’
Her shoulders drop, eyes fill and I spot the pea-sized burns the length of her arms.
I sigh. ‘OK. Come in, quickly. Were you followed?’ #WriteCBC
I wait.
She fidgets, glancing around. ‘About a room,’ she whispers.
‘No room here.’
Her shoulders drop, eyes fill and I spot the pea-sized burns the length of her arms.
I sigh. ‘OK. Come in, quickly. Were you followed?’ #WriteCBC
‘She said she’d look after us.’
Jim shrugs. ‘She says a lot of things.’
‘But these?’ I hold up the plans I’ve found for the block of flats where our cottages sit.
‘She doesn’t care. Quick, let’s go. She’s coming back.’
He heads out but I stay to face her. Now it’s me who doesn’t care.
‘She said she’d look after us.’
Jim shrugs. ‘She says a lot of things.’
‘But these?’ I hold up the plans I’ve found for the block of flats where our cottages sit.
‘She doesn’t care. Quick, let’s go. She’s coming back.’
He heads out but I stay to face her. Now it’s me who doesn’t care.
As the door flung open an icy blast threw them against the wall.
'Now!' Her mother yelled.
Ella hurled the flames into the darkness, splintering the air with jewels, lighting up the figure in the doorway.
Ella's mother frowned. 'Nick?'
'I'm home.'
'But the postcard?'
'I'm sorry.'
As the door flung open an icy blast threw them against the wall.
'Now!' Her mother yelled.
Ella hurled the flames into the darkness, splintering the air with jewels, lighting up the figure in the doorway.
Ella's mother frowned. 'Nick?'
'I'm home.'
'But the postcard?'
'I'm sorry.'
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Ella fought her way out of the ice, kicking away the freezing shards. An eerie silence lay over the room.
'Phew, that was close,' Ella hissed, grabbing her mother's hand.
She tugged her from the ice but it wasn't her mother who rose, it was the one person she feared most.
Ella fought her way out of the ice, kicking away the freezing shards. An eerie silence lay over the room.
'Phew, that was close,' Ella hissed, grabbing her mother's hand.
She tugged her from the ice but it wasn't her mother who rose, it was the one person she feared most.