Tavi being so helpless is giving me an ulcer.
Tavi being so helpless is giving me an ulcer.
It's like people writing nonfiction essays before telling you how to make mac and cheese.
It's like people writing nonfiction essays before telling you how to make mac and cheese.
Which might just be the furthest I've gotten towards completing a story since I've been trying to write.
Still going to have to add more details but it's improvement.
Which might just be the furthest I've gotten towards completing a story since I've been trying to write.
Still going to have to add more details but it's improvement.
Learning how to marry character stories with the plot is going to be a very large hurdle.
And I've already tripped over it.
Learning how to marry character stories with the plot is going to be a very large hurdle.
And I've already tripped over it.
I've created a monster.
I've created a monster.
Rin's desperation is conveyed perfectly, and by the end of the first chapter, all the struggle is well worth it.
Rin's desperation is conveyed perfectly, and by the end of the first chapter, all the struggle is well worth it.