I have decided that this is where I'm going to be filthy.
1. Not enough ways to describe a bj or the feel of having one's throat stuffed
2. Pronoun - which 'he' are we referring to now?
3. It's hard to write about headspaces without pulling the reader out of the action
1. Not enough ways to describe a bj or the feel of having one's throat stuffed
2. Pronoun - which 'he' are we referring to now?
3. It's hard to write about headspaces without pulling the reader out of the action