As an update to this… no nicotine the entire pregnancy and the postpartum period is really making it hard not to pick it back up. Miss it like you miss a toxic ex

Morning! Hope you’re having a great day ❤️

Anyway, if anyone has advice for pacing improvement, I’m all ears. I struggle with meandering useless dialogue that somehow then moves too quickly during emotional breakthroughs/changes.

These are so fantastic and just *on point*. Thank you for your thoughtful suggestions.

It certainly does. Thank you!

Awesome! Graphic novels are an amazing art form. I will have to collect some of those titles!

Thank you so much for your recs! I loved Matilda and The Boxcar Children growing up!

Excellent! Thank you so much for the thoughtful reply ❤️ I appreciate you!

lovely little commas that add flavor