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CW: Parental death
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https://elisimpson.substack.com/p/snowfall (2/2)
Read the rest of "Snowfall" on Substack.
CW: Parental death
#WritingCommunity #Grief
https://elisimpson.substack.com/p/snowfall (2/2)
My world had righted.
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Photo by Frankie Lopez on Unsplash (76/76)
My world had righted.
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Photo by Frankie Lopez on Unsplash (76/76)
He whooped. My parents coughed awkwardly. Serves them right. Maria beamed. (75/76)
He whooped. My parents coughed awkwardly. Serves them right. Maria beamed. (75/76)
I looked at Maria. She nodded.
“He finally, actually apologized.”
“And..?”
“Petey, my boy—” He hated when I started pretend-wise—“an hour under the bleachers is more than enough (74/76)
I looked at Maria. She nodded.
“He finally, actually apologized.”
“And..?”
“Petey, my boy—” He hated when I started pretend-wise—“an hour under the bleachers is more than enough (74/76)
We sat on the porch, talking, sipping sodas when Mom and Dad joined us, stealing sips from Maria's flask when they weren't paying attention, and talked late into the night.
At some point, Peter asked me, “So… Jacob?”
Mom and Dad were standing on the driveway, (73/76)
We sat on the porch, talking, sipping sodas when Mom and Dad joined us, stealing sips from Maria's flask when they weren't paying attention, and talked late into the night.
At some point, Peter asked me, “So… Jacob?”
Mom and Dad were standing on the driveway, (73/76)
“No girlfriend?” I questioned.
“She told me that women shouldn't have jobs.”
“Ew,” Maria and I agreed in unison. (72/76)
“No girlfriend?” I questioned.
“She told me that women shouldn't have jobs.”
“Ew,” Maria and I agreed in unison. (72/76)
“You already knew.”
“I did.”
“How?”
“I have my ways,” she wiggled her eyebrows at me. “Also, his eyes follow you everywhere. Anyone actually paying attention would have noticed. He's gone for you, baby boy.”
That brought the first mirthful laugh to my lips in week. (71/76)
“You already knew.”
“I did.”
“How?”
“I have my ways,” she wiggled her eyebrows at me. “Also, his eyes follow you everywhere. Anyone actually paying attention would have noticed. He's gone for you, baby boy.”
That brought the first mirthful laugh to my lips in week. (71/76)
Maria was waiting for me in the parking lot. (70/76)
Maria was waiting for me in the parking lot. (70/76)
“A month. Okay. Yeah. Can I text you?”
“Yes. About school. Nothing else. One message that mentions anything but schoolwork and I'm out. Got it?” The puppy Jacob had become nodded. Oh. That was… I was not going down that path right now. (69/76)
“A month. Okay. Yeah. Can I text you?”
“Yes. About school. Nothing else. One message that mentions anything but schoolwork and I'm out. Got it?” The puppy Jacob had become nodded. Oh. That was… I was not going down that path right now. (69/76)
“Yeah. That one, too,” agreed Jake.
“Damn right,” I said.
“So… Date?”
“Ask me again in a month.”
“That long?”
“You punched (68/76)
“Yeah. That one, too,” agreed Jake.
“Damn right,” I said.
“So… Date?”
“Ask me again in a month.”
“That long?”
“You punched (68/76)
I slapped him. That was a good compromise. (67/76)
I slapped him. That was a good compromise. (67/76)
Or maybe I had. People are allowed to make mistakes, I reminded myself, even ones that are terrible. (66/76)
Or maybe I had. People are allowed to make mistakes, I reminded myself, even ones that are terrible. (66/76)
WHAT?
I think I made noises. I must have. Jacob laughed in an awkward, strangled sort of way.
“Yeah… Um. I told Mom that day I thought you were cute. (65/76)
WHAT?
I think I made noises. I must have. Jacob laughed in an awkward, strangled sort of way.
“Yeah… Um. I told Mom that day I thought you were cute. (65/76)
Watery eyes found. Watery eyes really weren't scary by any measure. They were… kind of adorable.
“Really?”
"Yes," I said too quickly. How was my mouth ahead of my brain? I hadn't forgiven him yet.
“Mine started when we were eight. (64/76)
Watery eyes found. Watery eyes really weren't scary by any measure. They were… kind of adorable.
“Really?”
"Yes," I said too quickly. How was my mouth ahead of my brain? I hadn't forgiven him yet.
“Mine started when we were eight. (64/76)
“Jake…”
“You don't have to.”
I sighed in exasperation. “I know. (63/76)
“Jake…”
“You don't have to.”
I sighed in exasperation. “I know. (63/76)
"Would you... Would you still wannagoonadatewimme?" he wobbled.
Did I? (62/76)
"Would you... Would you still wannagoonadatewimme?" he wobbled.
Did I? (62/76)
His eyes found the ground. I felt like I had kicked a puppy.
"And you called me a 'f--.' DUDE!"
"Yeah... That was... I'm sorry."
"Don't ever let me hear you say that word again. In any context."
"Yeah. Okay. Yeah."
I raised my fist again and paused. (61/76)
His eyes found the ground. I felt like I had kicked a puppy.
"And you called me a 'f--.' DUDE!"
"Yeah... That was... I'm sorry."
"Don't ever let me hear you say that word again. In any context."
"Yeah. Okay. Yeah."
I raised my fist again and paused. (61/76)
"Yeah. Yeah. I... deserved that."
"You did," I agreed. "You're an asshole. You could have just said, 'No.' Did you know (60/76)
"Yeah. Yeah. I... deserved that."
"You did," I agreed. "You're an asshole. You could have just said, 'No.' Did you know (60/76)