Hit different if you've been watching Pluribus

Absolutely 👍

It's funny - if I'm watching something, I mainly pick apart big picture stuff, especially plot/plot holes and character. When reading I do pay more attention to language. I understand the big picture stuff you're looking for, so it might just be a matter of getting into that mode

In addition to helping you, I think the experience would be very educational for me!

Great!
Quite a few series, many more than once: Stormlight/Mistborn, Farseer Trilogy, Gentleman Bastard series, Kingkiller Chronicles - just a few the top of my head. I haven't done writers' critiques, but I'm a writer myself (not necessarily fantasy).

Lives rent-free, I think about it all the time

Every time someone comments that they've been gone for months instead of days they look like they want to object, but they don't. Then they look awkwardly at one another for a moment, growing quiet.

Stop believing the fantasy that the Democrats will save or even help us.

Eventually you're going to get tired of posting *shock* at the Dem's nonreactions, anyway.

And then

And then

First stop: Let's Get Surreal