Looks canon to me

“The journey is both relatable and emotional, and the pacing strikes a perfect balance between action and reflection. This is a promising start to what I'm sure will be an exciting series, and I can't wait for more!”

“Of Lofty Outcasts is a captivating fantasy debut by Melissa Goldsmith. The world-building is rich, and the plot keeps you hooked with its twists and engaging characters.”

I’d take out ‘she noted that’ it flows better and it’s implied already

I'm thinking wrist but I have no money 🥲

I prefer order vs chaos

Both. optimism hits hard in a world capable of darkness.