Try this instead:

"Hey Mozart, quick question-what’s the ONE thing KILLING your progress?"

It will work:

1. It's personal (use their name + ask about THEM).
2. Low-pressure (no “BUY NOW” energy).
3. Forces engagement (reply = they’re invested).

example: swap “JOIN MY PROGRAM” with “here’s how NOT to do deadlifts” → 5x more replies.

here’s the free game:
➡️ stop selling in the first email.
➡️ start with a *‘no-brainer’ freebie* (like a 3-day workout plan) or simply a personal story of value.
➡️ make it stupid easy to say yes (“reply YES and i’ll send it”).