The (very) cool kids are reading On the Calculation of Volume

Your terms are: “a strangely independent world” (24); “an invisible dimension” apart from our own (181); fictional being is upheld and valorized without “competing for space with actual being” (173). I think my characterization captures your argument here albeit in the mode of strenuous disagreement

I attempted in the review to “provide receipts” for each of the points you bring up; I’ll leave it to the reader to decide (he or she can follow up the page numbers) whether I’m representing your argument fairly. It’s true that for # 1 & 3, you don’t put it in the terms that I use to make the point

Hi Danny, it was a privilege to engage your book, about which I did have substantial qualms, in keeping with the substantial issues you raised—here you respond to a few of the major ones. I appreciate your fair minded engagement with my criticisms, although I imagine we will never entirely agree.

Something like this

My most treasured clothing as a child was a “Miami Mice” shirt (I was not in on the joke)