I just finished this book and felt like I learnt so much !! Was shocked to be the first person to review it on Goodreads- it deserves so much more praise- 5 stars 🌟

Ah I see, I meant in the second instance, because I haven’t been separating action tags with dialogue via full stop! Appreciate the comment

I call nectarines nec-nec’s😂

Oh that is good to know! Helpful so if I haven’t heard this week then it’s not me :)

Amazing !! I wish all the editors revealed their #revpit 10 queries list so we could know if it was our feedback or not too!!

So tricky! I had a feeling I wouldn’t be picked but a few weeks ago LUCKILY I found scribophile and have met a bunch of talented writers and we critique each others work and it’s so cool to feel encouraged & have lots of eyes on my work. Might be a good thing to try! Otherwise I’d feel hopeless❤️

Ooooh interesting!! Would you say the REALLY is a bad thing (not in line with expectations?) or a good thing? (Got you hooked?)

I was on the edge of my seat!

I can’t wait!!

The gooseberry artwork is gorgeous!!!

hahahah we love delulu!!

That’s too kind thank you!!

Just a dash. Excellent I will do that!

Season 2 episode 3…it’s so hard to savour it when it’s so easy to watch all at once!

Avoiding spoilers is so hard!! I’m going to get up to date on the tv show then start the books 😂😂 great username by the way- not suspicious at all 👀