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French Canadian / amateur Psy-fi Writer / Inxtrovert / Lover of movies, TV series, comic books, absurd and dark humor / prefer logical logic / NO politics. NO crypto. NO bots. NO A.I. Thank you!
1st pass edit is going great
fine tuning characters' voices

The detective with a painful past
The attractive client
The old grumpy coroner
The brutish twins
The obsessed phychopath
The nervous policeman
The eager soldier
The ruthless CEO
The head

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December 2, 2025 at 12:17 PM
i didn't do it becasue i didn't find it.

But today is the first pass of revision/editing...
before the translation.

If it's there i'll find it.
If i don't find it, it's not necessary.

Have a great day !!

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#NeedVsWant
Fisnished this short story this mornig. Yeah1
i already know i had to go back to ass one little paragraph.
Maybe i should do it now.

I'll be back.

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#Writetinator
the planned 12 pages short story ,
is now almost 50 pages.

I still have the epilogue to write... 1 or 2 more pages.

As research, i watched 1973's The Long Goodbye, with Eliot Gould. I couldn't finish the movie. That song, everywhere!!!

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#TheLongGoodbye
December 1, 2025 at 11:32 AM
Fisnished this short story this mornig. Yeah1
i already know i had to go back to ass one little paragraph.
Maybe i should do it now.

I'll be back.

#writingcommunity
#writerscommunity
#Writetinator
the planned 12 pages short story ,
is now almost 50 pages.

I still have the epilogue to write... 1 or 2 more pages.

As research, i watched 1973's The Long Goodbye, with Eliot Gould. I couldn't finish the movie. That song, everywhere!!!

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#TheLongGoodbye
November 30, 2025 at 12:15 PM
the planned 12 pages short story ,
is now almost 50 pages.

I still have the epilogue to write... 1 or 2 more pages.

As research, i watched 1973's The Long Goodbye, with Eliot Gould. I couldn't finish the movie. That song, everywhere!!!

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#TheLongGoodbye
November 29, 2025 at 12:13 PM
To the one who said "write what you know"... eff off !
lol

Those 3 pages this morning really hit hard.

I must be crazy to want someone to read this one day.

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#CrazyAsCrazyDoes
November 27, 2025 at 12:41 PM
But seriously,
i forgot to melt the gun.

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#GrilledCheese
i did another pass on those pages this morning.
i thought about it all day yesterday.
i felt like it was missing something.
i'm pretty happy with now.

come to think of it ...

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#JustWheniThoughtiWasOut
6 solid pages this morning.
good work !
thank you.
it's nothing.
i mean it.
who can support us if not ourselves.
agreed. breakfast ?
yeah!
what would you like?
2 eggs, 4 toasts?
i'm down with that. let's go!

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#FoodForThought
November 25, 2025 at 10:14 AM
i did another pass on those pages this morning.
i thought about it all day yesterday.
i felt like it was missing something.
i'm pretty happy with now.

come to think of it ...

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#JustWheniThoughtiWasOut
6 solid pages this morning.
good work !
thank you.
it's nothing.
i mean it.
who can support us if not ourselves.
agreed. breakfast ?
yeah!
what would you like?
2 eggs, 4 toasts?
i'm down with that. let's go!

#writingcommunity #writerscommunity
#FoodForThought
November 24, 2025 at 1:04 PM
6 solid pages this morning.
good work !
thank you.
it's nothing.
i mean it.
who can support us if not ourselves.
agreed. breakfast ?
yeah!
what would you like?
2 eggs, 4 toasts?
i'm down with that. let's go!

#writingcommunity #writerscommunity
#FoodForThought
November 23, 2025 at 1:04 PM
i'm thinking 2 chapters & 2 epilogues left.
it was supposed to be a fun pulp homage.
It turned into an exploration on pain.
No, my MC is not a Cenobite.

I still haven't decided if MC kills the bad guy or not.
if so, accidently or not.

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November 19, 2025 at 1:54 PM
Good morning #writingcommunity

the lyrics of Blinded by the light, by Mafred Mann
are:
"Blinded by the light
Revved up like a deuce, another runner in the night."

i keep hearing "Hiccup like a douche..."

Have a nice day !
November 15, 2025 at 11:54 AM
Slight panic when you realized
you haven't saved and backed-up your wip
in more than 2 hours.

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#SomebodySaveMe 🎶
November 10, 2025 at 12:24 PM
i went to move things around ...
and just by adding one sentence
i didn't have to re-write a whole page.

Nice !

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#LessIsMore
November 5, 2025 at 12:24 PM
i wrote a speech for a dead president .

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#totheMoon
November 3, 2025 at 12:08 AM
1/2
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So... i'm writnig a flashback.
I hate flashbacks.
There can be no tension in flashbacks.
But... it's needed to follow the reasonning of my MC.
Now... i'm thinking about splitting it in 3 to follow the current events.
October 31, 2025 at 10:46 PM
Hey!
I think i did good this morning.
Wrote a whole scene.
Pushed the narrative.
Planted seeds.
I foreshadowed.
Yep!
I think i did good.

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#GoshDarnit
i made a mistake.
i have to re-do the whole flashback timeline.

😬👍

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#TimeAfterTime
i had to do this to myself.

i added to my character's background.
Now, i have to build a credible timeline:
years, months, how long, what, why.

Would you believe i'm having fun ?

😁👍

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#WhatTimeisit
October 28, 2025 at 12:53 PM
i made a mistake.
i have to re-do the whole flashback timeline.

😬👍

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#writerscommunity
#TimeAfterTime
i had to do this to myself.

i added to my character's background.
Now, i have to build a credible timeline:
years, months, how long, what, why.

Would you believe i'm having fun ?

😁👍

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#writerscommunity
#WhatTimeisit
October 28, 2025 at 11:12 AM
I just created 5 new futuristic companies
for this short story ... that i won't be able
to use ever again.

AAAAAAAAAAARRRGH !

Thank you.

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#Blessing/Curse
October 26, 2025 at 6:46 PM
i had to do this to myself.

i added to my character's background.
Now, i have to build a credible timeline:
years, months, how long, what, why.

Would you believe i'm having fun ?

😁👍

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#WhatTimeisit
October 25, 2025 at 1:41 PM
So...
this scene...
fight scene... "professional".
Later...
another fight scene... "This time, it's personnal".

The 1st i've been running in my head for the last 2 days.
I think i found a fun way. 2 goons against MC.

To be continued.

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#LetThemFight
October 20, 2025 at 12:35 PM
i decided to add a scene at the end...
which made me rewrite the scene i was in...
and add 3 more scenes...
and made me change their placement...
and rethink the when and what of 2 important events...
which made plot all afternoon.

That's it. That's the post.

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I decided to put titles to divided each scenes in this short story. i think it works well.

Was writing this scene and it went somewhere it wasn't supposed to ... so i changed the title.
No one will ever know.

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#codeofsilence
Good work this morning.

short character sheets
and first scene done.

I found my 'hook' at 2:25am, wrote it on my cellphone.
Slept real nice after.

Well, breakfast while watching The Golden Bachelor.

I know, I know.

i KNOW !!!

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October 18, 2025 at 8:52 PM
I decided to put titles to divided each scenes in this short story. i think it works well.

Was writing this scene and it went somewhere it wasn't supposed to ... so i changed the title.
No one will ever know.

#writingcommunity
#writerscommunity
#codeofsilence
Good work this morning.

short character sheets
and first scene done.

I found my 'hook' at 2:25am, wrote it on my cellphone.
Slept real nice after.

Well, breakfast while watching The Golden Bachelor.

I know, I know.

i KNOW !!!

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#writerscommnunity
#goldencommunity
October 17, 2025 at 10:37 AM
Good work this morning.

short character sheets
and first scene done.

I found my 'hook' at 2:25am, wrote it on my cellphone.
Slept real nice after.

Well, breakfast while watching The Golden Bachelor.

I know, I know.

i KNOW !!!

#writingcommunity
#writerscommnunity
#goldencommunity
October 16, 2025 at 12:02 PM
Well, i flipped the script.
Kennedy was the catalyst i needed instead of Nixon.

My intro is written and pretty well set.
I don't know what i could change.

Who's hungry ?

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#onehourlater 😏👍
October 15, 2025 at 12:18 PM
October 15, 2025 at 10:49 AM
Well, this one is pretty much done.

English: 9 pages, 1647 words.
French: 11 pages, 2179 words.

Tomorrow, back to an unfinished short.
I feel good about it.

And i had an idea about a friend of mine, being the angel of Death. That'll be fun to write, right? 😆👍

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In what was supposed to be the last pass of editing,
i rewrote a big chunk of the first 2 pages.

i'm taking a break ... then finishing this pass.

i guess it'll need ANOTHER pass, huh?

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#writerswriting
October 12, 2025 at 11:45 AM