"Alyss cranked her earbuds up, blocking out the drenched man’s cries for help to concentrate on her favorite part of the dark pop song."
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
"Alyss cranked her earbuds up, blocking out the drenched man’s cries for help to concentrate on her favorite part of the dark pop song."
I'm more than halfway through my second to last edit before querying! i.e. I'm on my way down the mountain and the finish line is in sight if you squint. I'll have to double back around with my weedwhacker to cut a bunch of unnecessary words though 😅
Hope your first night by the fire sparked your inspiration! 🔥
Today, your manuscript is your map. What stage of your project are you at? Are you lost in the woods? Climbing a mountain? Sailing the seven seas? Use a visual metaphor or a gif, or even draw us a map. #CampRevPit
I'm more than halfway through my second to last edit before querying! i.e. I'm on my way down the mountain and the finish line is in sight if you squint. I'll have to double back around with my weedwhacker to cut a bunch of unnecessary words though 😅
One Stop Shop for Everything Writing:
Ellen Brock (YouTube)
Character Emotions:
The Emotion Thesaurus by Ackerman & Puglisi
Line Edits:
kris MF (series on YouTube)
Self-Editing for Fiction Writers by Browne & King
Character:
The Emotional Craft of Fiction by D. Maass
This is my FAVORITE prompt #RevPit!
Editors have been so kind & helpful with 10 queries (even posting more than is required!)
And I also think WE have the capacity to help each other be better writers. So let's share 🤗
One Stop Shop for Everything Writing:
Ellen Brock (YouTube)
Character Emotions:
The Emotion Thesaurus by Ackerman & Puglisi
Line Edits:
kris MF (series on YouTube)
Self-Editing for Fiction Writers by Browne & King
Character:
The Emotional Craft of Fiction by D. Maass
I’m a mix of both, a plantser! I like to get going with a light outline to start. It’s very general with not much detail, more of a guideline to follow that is very flexible. Then I discovery write on the many parts the outline doesn’t cover
I might've pulled another switcheroo... There was a slight miscalculation on my part and I hadn't anticipated that virtually everyone talked about their hobbies in their personal intro.
So #RevPit ... the dreaded question:
I’m a mix of both, a plantser! I like to get going with a light outline to start. It’s very general with not much detail, more of a guideline to follow that is very flexible. Then I discovery write on the many parts the outline doesn’t cover
HUGE shoutout to my Pitch War's Class & their annual trash swap for all the query letter help and book feedback. Without ya'll my Alice in Wonderland x Kill Bill book would not be what it is today. Thank you to my alpha reader @jaqevans.com and my beta reader Suzy Darlington!
With #revpit 10queries starting to pop up, this is a great chance to give a shoutout to someone who helped you with your QP or MS!
Did anyone post their query on r/pubtips? Do you have any great beta readers or critique partners?
Resources to share?
HUGE shoutout to my Pitch War's Class & their annual trash swap for all the query letter help and book feedback. Without ya'll my Alice in Wonderland x Kill Bill book would not be what it is today. Thank you to my alpha reader @jaqevans.com and my beta reader Suzy Darlington!
Among Us inspi' Sci-Fi Horror
A last ditch space expedition is thrown together to save a dying Earth using resources from an abandoned underwater planet, but a sabotaged ship and shapeshifting goop monster onboard hijack the mission 👀
Among Us inspi' Sci-Fi Horror
A last ditch space expedition is thrown together to save a dying Earth using resources from an abandoned underwater planet, but a sabotaged ship and shapeshifting goop monster onboard hijack the mission 👀
Hard to pick but I settled on one of my first few favorites in Act 1. For context, Alyss confronts the ex that's tasked with stopping her revenge.
Hard to pick but I settled on one of my first few favorites in Act 1. For context, Alyss confronts the ex that's tasked with stopping her revenge.
Did I have 3 other moodboards I already made for my #revpit book I could've used? Yes. Did I make a 4th moodboard because it's fun and totally not an addiction? Also yes.
I was trying to capture the vibe my book has of "pops of color in a dark gritty setting" 🤔
Did I have 3 other moodboards I already made for my #revpit book I could've used? Yes. Did I make a 4th moodboard because it's fun and totally not an addiction? Also yes.
I was trying to capture the vibe my book has of "pops of color in a dark gritty setting" 🤔
Meet Alyss! She's a 26-year-old black American with Trinidadian roots. Part party-girl, part hitman with a machete, she's a disaster and a half, and I love her 😭
Meet Alyss! She's a 26-year-old black American with Trinidadian roots. Part party-girl, part hitman with a machete, she's a disaster and a half, and I love her 😭
💔 Her 🇰🇷 ex's job is to stop her
🇹🇹 While the Trini monster in her ear plans to corrupt her
#Revpitwaiting
You wrote a whole BOOK, and today's prompt is a chance to show it off 🤭 Tell us anything and everything you want about it! Make us swoon over villains, gasp at intricate plots, or give us warm feelings with cozy settings.
Don't forget to include ALT text for images!
💔 Her 🇰🇷 ex's job is to stop her
🇹🇹 While the Trini monster in her ear plans to corrupt her
#Revpitwaiting
I write some blend of SFF/H with black FMCs in stories that always have a bit of heart and a bit of bite. Love to game, love nature/gardening, and my fav timesuck is watching YouTube 😆
This is a totally community-made game that I thought might be fun while we’re waiting!
I’ll post more explanations every day which you can QT if you’d like. Maybe we can make some long-lasting book friends on the way and keep company while #revpitwaiting!
I write some blend of SFF/H with black FMCs in stories that always have a bit of heart and a bit of bite. Love to game, love nature/gardening, and my fav timesuck is watching YouTube 😆