So many figures have a title at the top, but not a legend. The title says what we are looking at, but not why you want us to see it. There's a better way. I say this so often when reviewing client proposals that I have a macro and just tell Dragon, "Legend note."

Perennial reminder: If a sentence from your grant proposal could be copied and pasted into pretty much any other proposal, then it doesn't belong in yours.

sometimes I just pause and reflect on how we don't regulate the $40+ billion supplement industry (for freedom and innovation for whatever), despite the fact they engage in behavior far worse than this, constantly, at massive scale

This sounds amazing !