#mildredambrose #milly a character with great duality from my forthcoming novel. Illustrated by Todd Blackwood
January 21, 2025 at 6:53 AM
#mildredambrose #milly a character with great duality from my forthcoming novel. Illustrated by Todd Blackwood
—The bartender shuts the door behind them and turns the deadbolt lock.
That’s not wrong, just verbose. Turns out, deadbolt is a verb.
—The bartender deadbolts the door behind them.
There. Better ... in my opinion, at least. I love this aspect of writing.
That’s not wrong, just verbose. Turns out, deadbolt is a verb.
—The bartender deadbolts the door behind them.
There. Better ... in my opinion, at least. I love this aspect of writing.
January 12, 2025 at 1:02 AM
—The bartender shuts the door behind them and turns the deadbolt lock.
That’s not wrong, just verbose. Turns out, deadbolt is a verb.
—The bartender deadbolts the door behind them.
There. Better ... in my opinion, at least. I love this aspect of writing.
That’s not wrong, just verbose. Turns out, deadbolt is a verb.
—The bartender deadbolts the door behind them.
There. Better ... in my opinion, at least. I love this aspect of writing.