For me, the 5-7-5 structure is the foundation, not a constraint. Within it, I write what I want. Here’s a senryu from day #50:
Cramped hands kern corners
Elbows swivel on margins
Cutting minute scrawls
For me, the 5-7-5 structure is the foundation, not a constraint. Within it, I write what I want. Here’s a senryu from day #50:
Cramped hands kern corners
Elbows swivel on margins
Cutting minute scrawls
For me, the 5-7-5 structure is the foundation, not a constraint. Within it, I write what I want. Here’s a senryu from day #50:
Cramped hands kern corners
Elbows swivel on margins
Cutting minute scrawls