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I am so grateful for things like #RevPit #10queries that will help me grow as a writer. It's the night before we get feedback and I'm both so excited and terrified. But no matter what the feedback is, it's only going to make BORROWED TOMORROWS that much better.

If Althea wants to reclaim her humanity, she must complete a ritual with a mortal. Dalmaine is willing to do anything to bring her sister back from the dead and the two try to complete the ritual without attracting unwanted attention from Althea’s deity or falling in love.

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Eeeep! I was selected and I am so grateful for any and all help! Can't wait get to get the feedback.

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If Althea wants to reclaim her humanity, she must complete a ritual with a mortal. Dalmaine is willing to do anything to bring her sister back from the dead and the two try to complete the ritual without attracting unwanted attention from Althea’s deity or falling in love. #DVpit #A #CF #LGBT

Dalmaine's hands are drenched in her sister's blood. Literally.

Immortality should be a second chance to live. For Althea it's a reminder of what she unwillingly gave up.

When the two meet they enter a risky bargain focused on bringing what was in the past into the present.

#DVPit #A #LGBT #CF

Attend own funeral? ✔️
Serve as ferryman for the recently deceased? ✔️
Fall in love? 💜
Become human again ⁉️

Morals gone with her mortality Althea must complete a ritual with a human if she wants to live again. All while avoiding the attention of her new deity

#DVpit #LGBT #ContFantasy #A #Romance

THE HONEY WITCH x UNDER THE WHISPERING DOOR
Althea and Dalmaine’s lives were intertwined from the moment they locked eyes. Fighting against time and their growing attraction for each other they attempt to undergo a ritual that would grant both of them what they desired most.
#DVPit #A #CF #LGBT

If Althea wants to reclaim her humanity, she must undergo a ritual with a mortal. Dalmaine will do anything to bring her sister back from the dead and the two try to complete the ritual without attracting unwanted attention from Althea’s deity or falling in love #DVpit #A #LGBT #ContemporaryFantasy

When Althea attends a strange job interview, she doesn’t expect to die—let alone wake up as a Keeper of Scales, forced to guide souls to the afterlife. To reclaim her mortality, she attempts a ritual with a bereft woman while avoiding the wrath of her deity and falling in love. #DVpit #CF #A #LGBT

What would you do if you were able to see the memories of the dead and were immortal but it came with the cost of being dead to your loved ones? If you chose anything you and my MC Althea have a lot in common in my new book Borrowed Tomorrows. #DVParty day 6