Cir, a non-native English poet
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Cir, a non-native English poet
@cirpoemel.bsky.social
I am a non-native speaker of English, but let me write poems using English words here, because that could be fun (sometimes the grammar might not be that of English). I also write poems in Japanese: @cirpoem.bsky.social

"Grumpy"

I am in a bad mood this morning,
because I couldn't see you while I was sleeping,
and you didn't even appear in my dreams!

#poem
#poetry
March 16, 2024 at 6:04 PM
I enjoy reading your calm, thoughtful, and zen-like poems too😊
March 15, 2024 at 1:18 PM
Thank you too 😊
March 15, 2024 at 1:16 PM
Thanks! I didn't realize it before but yeah, it does go well with the rhythm of hopscotch! 😊
March 15, 2024 at 9:49 AM
Thank you so much for reading all my work!
I am glad to hear that😊
I didn't know about Natsuki(DDLC) but I will check it out😊
March 15, 2024 at 9:43 AM
Thank you so much for commenting with your wonderful poem! It's beautiful😊
March 14, 2024 at 12:48 AM

"It means"

When I say I like it,
it means I like it
When I say I hate it,
it means I hate it
When I say I love you,
it means I love you
When I say I hate you,
it means I love you

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#poem
#poetry
March 14, 2024 at 12:36 AM
😊😆
March 13, 2024 at 12:17 PM
😆
March 13, 2024 at 12:10 PM
😊
March 12, 2024 at 8:01 PM
Thanks a lot 😊
March 12, 2024 at 10:59 AM

"Dancing in the rain"

I know you love dancing,
but you don't have to
dance and laugh like that
in this pouring rain, on the street
where busy people pass by,
because, you know,
okay, fine, I'm joining!

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#poem #poetry
March 12, 2024 at 12:58 AM
Thanks! 😆
March 10, 2024 at 10:25 PM
Thanks! 😊
March 10, 2024 at 5:57 PM
Thanks again😊
March 10, 2024 at 5:56 PM
Thanks😊
March 10, 2024 at 5:41 AM
😆
March 9, 2024 at 11:58 PM
Thank you so much, much, much😆
March 9, 2024 at 11:57 PM
I couldn't write much this week in English😥
I will try to write more often. Thanks!!
March 9, 2024 at 11:39 PM
Thank you so much again for your encouraging words!! 😆
March 9, 2024 at 11:37 PM
That sounds like a great way to teach both standard format and how to develop a unique voice!😊
March 9, 2024 at 11:35 PM
Your comments also encouraged me a lot😊 I am more motivated to keep writing! (although I couldn't write much this week because of other busy stuff...)
I also read works of Murakami😊
March 9, 2024 at 11:32 PM
Thank you for your encouraging words😊
It is very motivating to hear from a native-speaker like you that what I'm trying to do is not wrong.
March 9, 2024 at 10:36 PM
Thank you so much for offering help with my grammar. That's very kind of you! While I strive for grammatical correctness in some poems (though I might make mistakes), others are intentionally unnatural. Some readers might not enjoy broken English, but I use it to distinguish myself from others😊
March 9, 2024 at 10:23 PM
Thanks, thanks, thanks😆
March 9, 2024 at 7:48 PM