Wait, you read it too?! I couldn't stop laughing at how bad it was. Made me remember a golden rules of story Tell "show, dont tell!!!"

How I see it, if I never achieved my first goals from last year, why make more. So its the same as last year. I keep redoing chapter 1 because of my perfectionist issues. But this time, I said fuck it. We are Rewriting Raizza.
I am setting a goal ro have chapter 1 written and drawn out by July.

"snot" yeah, no I see how it can be funny too.

At this point, snot is our Nose's lube. Thats how it gets through the tightest of spots.