Thanks, Natasha. I hadn't even considered that!

Good questions! Bugsy is a boy who moves into a new house with his parents. Lumi is the girl who lives in a secret treehouse in their garden. He finds it difficult to make friends. I don't really like that line, but I'm trying not to repeat myself.

Think I just sneaked in! Thank you for the reminder, as my ND brain doesn't really 'notice' dates. 😍

Thanks, John. I've only just managed to create an agent's guide, so I want to throw it everywhere! :D

Thank you for the suggestions. I agree with the cockatoo name - I was in two minds. It's not really a dual POV - Bugsy is the main character, but when he finds her treehouse the reader sees what's in the treehouse before he does. But she's the MC, if I'm honest.

When Bugsy finds a wild girl living in a treehouse with a talking umbrella & a cockatoo named Sidney, he isn't expecting a new friend. But when pets vanish & the village turns against them, Lumi & Bugsy must team up to solve the mystery & clear their names.
#MG #MockPit #FiFiRevPit #OwnVoice

I loved this one! 🥰

"A Christmas proposal? How very exciting!" I nodded, the ring heavy on my finger. My smile felt tight, stretched, unwilling.
"A Summer wedding. We can't wait!" My eyes dropped her gaze, shifting nervously as I rubbed the bruise on my arm. One of many. A reminder of how I should behave. Must behave.

I got it totally wrong! 🤣

I didn't even count words on mine, so could easily have been mine. I think mine was by Ash P.

Lovely to see you had helpful feedback, I think?

I'm a little bit sad you didn't critique mine, just for the level of enthusiasm you showed!🥰

Who was yours by? I think I've narrowed mine down to 2!

🤣 I just can't tell any more! I did a brilliant Pitching course, but I put this in before the course!

Could be mine? I hoped mine had intrigue, but sometimes we're too close to our stories, which is why #revpit is so useful! 🥰

I'd love for this to be mine, but Imposter Syndrome says no!