That’s what I was worried about, that it wasn’t really YA because it doesn’t have romance. Thank you so much for all the advice!

Thank you for the advice!

Thank you 🙏🏻 I’ve been querying as MG and it never felt quite right…

It’s not satire anymore :(

Thank you!!

I love that though thank you! You all are getting my gears spinning!

Thanks for the advice I think those are great ideas!

Is it acceptable to put your pitch on a photo for pitch events to fit in more detail?

Love those points and ideas! I’m trying to get better at finagling character limits and details I’m going to play around with adding that info in. Thank you!!

Ok I’m intrigued and blushing. ✨

Great question she discovers them by accident after she moves into her aunt’s house and originally thinks they are a cult.. maybe I need to figure out a way to add that in there?

Ok awesome thank you so much!

Is something like this better?

When the Society of Curse Breakers is struck by a deadly curse, the blame falls on Alice despite her not being entirely sure magic even exists. To clear her name she must sail south solving ancient riddles and battling monsters before the curse claims them all.

Thank you for the advice I really appreciate it!

Thank you so much!