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I forget the exact line i wrote but Kal basically was like, she insults the music anytime she tries. But she CAN dance, so we'll let her do that.

There is a goddess of music at one point in the story, who does have a very lovely voice when she sings. She just never stops talking ><
apparently it's another aurora day in places it really shouldn't be.... it's faint and camera only (and neighbor 2 houses down now has some too bright lights, ugh)
Kalua is performing the 4 movement piano piece he wrote that's stupidly complex because, Kal. Magnar and Asta could join him on violin. Loke is not allowed to play anything, but she'll be permitted to dance.

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It's talent show day!

We are all putting together a talent show! What will your character's act be? Extremely flexible prompt, any talent goes!

If they don't like performing what backstage job would they want?

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Kalua plans so much and so far ahead and for as many issues as possible. He'll try to put as much as possible into routine and schedules, so nothing ever gets missed - inc. "time" with his husband, because he's ace but willing to appease his hubby's needs once in a while
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Is your character proactive or a procrastinator? Do they leave things to the last minute or prep early?

Does it matter what they are doing? Eg. do they put off mundane chores but keep ahead on other things?

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I'd rather the story itself be wrapped up but an open door to continue, not so much a cliffhanger. otherwise, to me, it's only half the book :/
Loke isn't the fastest to forgive (that's Magnar), but she is too idealistic and optimistic that sometimes she needs others to remind her that maybe some retribution is a good thing. But when she finds the killers of her parents, a bit after book 1, there was no mercy from her there. #WritingPrompt
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“Who is that guy?” Dias squinted to get a better look.

Loke shrugged. “Local thief, I think. He tried to steal from us yesterday. Magnar caught him in the act.”

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broke down crying by page 9, existential crisis by pg 12. a 6 year old orphan somehow is tagging along with him, so he's a little less mentally volatile, but he's not having a good time. He just wants to go home, which is 800 years in the past. He's still trying to grasp flying vehicles
Kalua HATES surprises. Hates them a lot. Even good ones frustrate him. He craves order and has certain expectations. Surprises are things he didn't plan and though he is usually adaptable, he still doesn't like it. His current tale is a big, unwelcome one

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Does your character enjoy surprises? Or would they prefer that things be routine?

Would they enjoy a surprise party but prefer no dangerous surprises? Or do they crave the excitement, even when there is risk?

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probably. unless you want your bookshelves reorganized in a way you probably won't like, but everything else will be spotless. (like, instead of A-Z it's by book size or genre). With Loke you just need to put them back on the shelves
Kal would clean your house but reorganize everything in a completely different way. delayed terror. Mahoe would throw a party and it would be a hot disaster until Mahana made him clean it. Loke would just leave a trail of all of your books behind.
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How likely is it to end badly if your character is asked to house-sit?

Will they take good care of the pets and water the plants? Throw a party? Accidentally burn the place down? End up in a fight somehow?

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I use little too much

“A little dangerous may be an understatement.” Magnar had returned with an armful of sticks and twigs. “I have a feeling Loke is going to get us all killed at some point. Oh, and I’m adding all this labor to my bill, too.”

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Maybe a little of both. She never had a normal upbringing so most of her childhood was completely lost :/
It's unnerving for people when they first see it, since their own forms are also drawn in chalk. Usually Loke has it look like a beach with a sky full of stars. What's cool is that the waves can move :)
When Loke finds her alternate "space" (the term I use spoils book 1), it's an entire black room with details drawn in chalk.
also, in book 1, when they go to find the spirit of darkness, there's a lot of black surrounding that particular event.
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We're talking about COLORS in our world this week. Tell me about something in your world that's BLACK. Do you use it symbolically? Do you have any special black objects or animals or magical items in your world? Tell us about them!
Loke knew their window was closing quickly and found that it was a little easier to maneuver as everyone was bowing their heads to pray but any movement she was trying to make was instantly stopped with Magnar’s hand pushing her head downwards.

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They all hate it. Loke and Magnar sneak away from them. Kalua sucks it up and deals with it despite being hounded by noblewomen for his hand or noblemen trying to gain his favor. he hates it. Mahoe is too pretty and gets ALL the attention he doesn't want

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What is your character's opinion on fancy parties?

Do they like getting dressed up and glad-handing?

Would they rather stay home in their pajamas?

Are they planning a heist while the guests are distracted?

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we have a lot of blinding white light XD in later books the "White space" in the god realm is a distinct location where there is absolutely nothing but white. No walls, no floors, just... white
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Hello, #NovemberWorldbuilders friends!
We're in COLORS week! Tell me about something in your world that's WHITE. Have you used it symbolically? Any special white clothes, rocks, animals, or magical artifacts you'd like to talk about?
Most of my characters aren't particularly fond of it, but understand that sometimes it's necessary. Magnar offs a few in chapter 1 and Loke shrugs it off, saying it was self defense.

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How does your character feel about violence?

Are they a committed pacifist? Generally gentle? Dangerous if pushed too far? An unrepentant killer?

Does that change as the story progresses?

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Loke's eyes. Mahoe and Mahana's eyes. In Holom, during the current monarch's reign, dark purple is the uniform color of the castle staff, so that's what Ikal is usually seen wearing. I think yatil's hair is also purple if I remember correctly. She's book 2+
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This week's theme is COLORS! Tell me about something in your world that's PURPLE. Do you use it symbolically? Do you have anything special in your worldbuilding that's purple? Maybe an animal, jewels, a garment, a flower, or something more strange and magical?
Kal would definitely be the fanciest cat. He's pretentious and needy though knows just the right buttons to push to get under someone's skin. Or how to be be cute for attention from his person. He's also obsessed with personal grooming.
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If you were to choose an animal to represent your character what animal would it be and why?

Real, mythological, or something unique to your setting?

If your character is already an animal, tell me about that!

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Equipped with warmer clothes and additional supplies, the group set off on the trail behind the village and up into the mountain. They were seen off by the innkeepers that wished them luck and for their god to watch over them.

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A lot of dialogue. They all get their turn to be the focus. I'm not entirely sure it's successful tho.