Maddy A
@gazineye.bsky.social
31 | aspiring bog witch | author of both the mammalian and the fantastic 🦡⚔️
#amquerying What Vengeance Might Bring
#amquerying What Vengeance Might Bring
Thank you so much, I really appreciate your help!!!
November 8, 2025 at 10:36 PM
Thank you so much, I really appreciate your help!!!
Hmm ok good point. Instead…
After Poppy the Quilldresser suffers the loss of her elderly friend, his hunky Blacksmith son moves in next door and awakens a cascade of repressed memories. In order to escape her painful flashbacks and befriend her new neighbor, Poppy must learn to accept her grief.
After Poppy the Quilldresser suffers the loss of her elderly friend, his hunky Blacksmith son moves in next door and awakens a cascade of repressed memories. In order to escape her painful flashbacks and befriend her new neighbor, Poppy must learn to accept her grief.
November 8, 2025 at 10:14 PM
Hmm ok good point. Instead…
After Poppy the Quilldresser suffers the loss of her elderly friend, his hunky Blacksmith son moves in next door and awakens a cascade of repressed memories. In order to escape her painful flashbacks and befriend her new neighbor, Poppy must learn to accept her grief.
After Poppy the Quilldresser suffers the loss of her elderly friend, his hunky Blacksmith son moves in next door and awakens a cascade of repressed memories. In order to escape her painful flashbacks and befriend her new neighbor, Poppy must learn to accept her grief.
Rowen Ember is the descendent of an ancient martyr, much to her chagrin. Now, a puppeteer is rewriting history by erasing her people's memories of the Great Battle. Rowen must confront the past and find the truth of her ancestor’s deeds, or suffer the same sacrificial fate.
November 8, 2025 at 5:37 PM
Rowen Ember is the descendent of an ancient martyr, much to her chagrin. Now, a puppeteer is rewriting history by erasing her people's memories of the Great Battle. Rowen must confront the past and find the truth of her ancestor’s deeds, or suffer the same sacrificial fate.
Thank you for your feedback!! After more revisions yesterday this was the pitch I ended up with (🧵)
November 8, 2025 at 5:37 PM
Thank you for your feedback!! After more revisions yesterday this was the pitch I ended up with (🧵)
After Poppy the Quilldresser suffers the loss of her elderly friend, his hunky Blacksmith son moves in next door and awakens a cascade of repressed memories. Poppy must embark on an emotional journey to accept her grief—and to befriend her new neighbor.
November 8, 2025 at 5:36 PM
After Poppy the Quilldresser suffers the loss of her elderly friend, his hunky Blacksmith son moves in next door and awakens a cascade of repressed memories. Poppy must embark on an emotional journey to accept her grief—and to befriend her new neighbor.
Thanks for your feedback! After more revisions this is the pitch I finished with yesterday (🧵)
November 8, 2025 at 5:36 PM
Thanks for your feedback! After more revisions this is the pitch I finished with yesterday (🧵)
Thank you so much!!! 🫶
November 7, 2025 at 11:56 PM
Thank you so much!!! 🫶
Perhaps not. My notes today have mostly been on vagueness so I was shooting for hyper-specificity 😆
November 7, 2025 at 10:38 PM
Perhaps not. My notes today have mostly been on vagueness so I was shooting for hyper-specificity 😆
I was thinking the same thing, but worried that it might read as his memories, or both of their memories, etc etc. Good note though, it is TOIGHT on character count
November 7, 2025 at 10:31 PM
I was thinking the same thing, but worried that it might read as his memories, or both of their memories, etc etc. Good note though, it is TOIGHT on character count
Clarity:
After Poppy the Quilldresser suffers the loss of her elderly best friend, his hunky Blacksmith son moves in next door and awakens a cascade of repressed memories within her. Poppy must embark on an emotional journey to accept her grief, irrevocably tying herself to her new neighbor. 💜🪶
After Poppy the Quilldresser suffers the loss of her elderly best friend, his hunky Blacksmith son moves in next door and awakens a cascade of repressed memories within her. Poppy must embark on an emotional journey to accept her grief, irrevocably tying herself to her new neighbor. 💜🪶
November 7, 2025 at 10:03 PM
Clarity:
After Poppy the Quilldresser suffers the loss of her elderly best friend, his hunky Blacksmith son moves in next door and awakens a cascade of repressed memories within her. Poppy must embark on an emotional journey to accept her grief, irrevocably tying herself to her new neighbor. 💜🪶
After Poppy the Quilldresser suffers the loss of her elderly best friend, his hunky Blacksmith son moves in next door and awakens a cascade of repressed memories within her. Poppy must embark on an emotional journey to accept her grief, irrevocably tying herself to her new neighbor. 💜🪶
Good point. Thank you for your feedback!
November 7, 2025 at 9:51 PM
Good point. Thank you for your feedback!
Damn this character limit! They are both multiple centuries old :-)
November 7, 2025 at 9:18 PM
Damn this character limit! They are both multiple centuries old :-)
Third iteration. Thank you all for your feedback. More details: adult cozy romantasy, ONWARD x ILLUMINATIONS
November 7, 2025 at 8:37 PM
Third iteration. Thank you all for your feedback. More details: adult cozy romantasy, ONWARD x ILLUMINATIONS
Thanks for your feedback! I’ll see if I can make it more clear.
November 7, 2025 at 7:30 PM
Thanks for your feedback! I’ll see if I can make it more clear.
Third iteration. Thank you all again for your feedback. More details: Adult Fantasy, THE RAVEN SCHOLAR x THE ADVENTURES OF AMINA AL-SIRAFI
November 7, 2025 at 7:13 PM
Third iteration. Thank you all again for your feedback. More details: Adult Fantasy, THE RAVEN SCHOLAR x THE ADVENTURES OF AMINA AL-SIRAFI
Great feedback. Thank you so much. I have such a hard time with making the stakes clear in a short pitch!
November 7, 2025 at 4:34 PM
Great feedback. Thank you so much. I have such a hard time with making the stakes clear in a short pitch!
Thanks so much, I really appreciate it!
November 7, 2025 at 4:29 PM
Thanks so much, I really appreciate it!
Thank you!! Totally ran out of characters for all the extra details 😅
Adult fantasy (24 yo FMC), THE RAVEN SCHOLAR x THE ADVENTURES OF AMINA AL-SIRAFI
Adult fantasy (24 yo FMC), THE RAVEN SCHOLAR x THE ADVENTURES OF AMINA AL-SIRAFI
November 7, 2025 at 4:24 PM
Thank you!! Totally ran out of characters for all the extra details 😅
Adult fantasy (24 yo FMC), THE RAVEN SCHOLAR x THE ADVENTURES OF AMINA AL-SIRAFI
Adult fantasy (24 yo FMC), THE RAVEN SCHOLAR x THE ADVENTURES OF AMINA AL-SIRAFI
Attempt 2. I am actively revising this pitch based on your feedback, so thank you.
November 7, 2025 at 3:54 PM
Attempt 2. I am actively revising this pitch based on your feedback, so thank you.