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Still chipping away at chapter 5
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Part way though Chapter 5. I've been wondering if I need to have some chapters from the antagonist's point of view. Not to make him sympathetic but to make it clear why some things happen.
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Chapter 4 is done, and Tessa just joined the story. I'm shooting for about a 100 pages which is between 30,000 to 45,000 words. Is this a bit late to be introducing the other lead?
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And that's Chapter 3 done for the first draft. Introduced the Protag's mentor and had some fun banter between them.
Need a good surname that goes with Theresa and Tessa.
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Life got in the way, but finally got back to writing this again. Finished Chapter 2.
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Not to mention it breaks up what should be whole clauses into parts that might not make sense in isolation and out of context.

Honestly, I'd forgotten I did that until you replied.

As for the threading, yeah, it helps, but it's a band-aid for a problem that's self-inflicted. Text, even unicode text, is incredibly cheap to store. I just don't see the point of keeping a feature that limits discourse.

She's a beauty of one. I've always been drawn to the designs of Homeworld and this has a similar vibe to it.

I honestly thought it was going to be for a haircut.

Nice, especially like the bottom left one. The one that looks like you took some inspiration from the V-22

Cargo ship?

Bastard really shoulda warned me about sweet, li'l things from Alabama looking for their brothers. Southern peaches may be sweet, but they have a helluva bite.

And this girly knew how to make her point quite eloquently in twelve-gauge.
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Continuing the conversation between Aaron, the protag, and Tirechan. Establishing some things about their relationship.
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I like these guys; they're cute.